I was on a hike through the country side. I was having a lovely time taking in the sights of rural England. I was with two of my friends, John and Lucy. They were going across fields so they can get to their destination. One of the crossing had an electrical fence. John and Lucy pleaded me to go the long and safe way around the fence. But knowing me I took the dangerous route. I was always a bit of a dear devil. I rolled under the wire carefully. However I was not careful enough and inevitable happend. My head hit the wire and I was on the floor and the rest was lost.
I woke up in a hospital bed with my family and friends around me with the doctor welcomeing me back to to the light. I felt something on my arm it would not go away. My vision
May 9, 2016 at 3:24 pm
Ryan,
This starts with the right level of suspense and opens in a similar style to Dahl’s short stories.
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